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The Complete Prequel Mini-Series to The Last Days of Qenateed gOr with a lot of potential but who needs instruction in the basics of writing and Ms O Leary definitely falls into this category While I imagine aood series of editors critiuing her work would have coaxed *her to better her writing while also teaching her some rules of the romance enre by putting *to better her writing

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also teaching some rules of the romance enre by putting her own books she s lacked this mentoring and it showsThe major flaw is one of characterization or lack thereof The hero is a SEAL but aside from the most shallow description of his teammates I m not convinced that the author has read a "SINGLE BOOK OR SPOKEN TO ANY "book or spoken to any of the military to research precisely what type of training or missions this branch of the service must undergo The heroine is an absolute Mary Sue with no apparent flaws except her poor self esteem only vaguely explained and her na vet Through the entire book I kept wondering why these two people were attracted to each otherWhich brings me to perhaps the most egregious problem of O Leary s writing Romance depends strongly on strong point of view writing so the reader not only understands which character s perspective they are currently enjoying but also ains a deeper understanding of that person s motivations and perceptions It was often not only difficult for me to to remember which character s POV I was hearing but her lack of mastery in writing dialogue meant that I often had to take extra time to figure out who was even speaking It s impossible to stay in a story when these types of mistakes continually jar you out of it and when there s a struggle to feel invested in a character I ended up returning this and another book of hers I purchased It s my sincere hope that the author continue to expand her talents by taking classes and studying her craft as she is clearly dedicated to her enre and can produce book after book Hopefully in time her writing abilities will catch up to her imagination but in the meantime I cannot recommend this novel. Rdened with scars from her past Mason understands that empowering her spirit is just as important as protecting her well being As their love and passion soars so do threats against her Can Mason continue to be the compassionate white knight that she needs while ensuring her safet. ,

Ut ends up needing to be rescued herselfMason becomes instantly aware that her need to be as independent as possible is important to her but when threats start happening he will have to call in his team to find a balance to keep Sophia happy and safe He sees her as his the love of his life and the woman he will move heaven and Earth for but first he has to convince her she wants him to be her SealIt will be difficult for Sophia to let o and trust Mason and his team but when she sees *How They Step With *they Step With Brother Her Walls Start To with brother her walls start to and she begins to see hope for the future Loving someone has proven to lead to loss and abandonment what if loving Mason and having him leave is the final blow to her heart and she will never recoverI can t tell you enough how Caitlyn brings her readers to the story instead of just providing entertainment for a few hours As I was reading this book I had to message her and let her know I have never been so wrapped up with a character like I was with Mason AND that this man is MINE I love how she can balance all of the emotions while telling a story that will affect your heart and soul She shows us how each character can see past their own needs heart and soul She shows us how each character can see past their own needs empower each other to reach their oals and dreams If you ever need a feel Spike (Aces MC, good story with some heavy hitting situations then Caitlyn O Leary is the author for you I just loved this story Sophia is such a strong character in when bad things happened she was determind to make it through and try to win her brother back from foster care Ah Mason I loved him he was just perfect He was demanding but not so pushy only because she was stubborn but in a way itood way This was reat story because although she tried to push away Mason was not having it they were reat together His teammates were awesome as well they all protective like older brothers to Sophia Can t wait to read Clint story I regularly stumble across a self published auth. Many dangers while in the line of duty No matter how bad a mission has one he finds solace in three things His family friends and the waves of the Pacific When he hears a woman’s screams for help he charges in to save her without a second thought A Dangerous Love Sophia is bu.
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Her Vigilant SEAL (Midnight Delta, #1)

REVIEW Ø NORFOLKFMRADIO.CO.UK ´ Caitlyn OLeary

I was so honored to receive this book called Her Vigilant Seal Midnight Delta 1by the author Caitlyn O Leary who is a new author to me I happened to stumble upon this new author on Facebook from friends of mine and I have to say I m lad I did because this book was awesome if you love anything with romance then you are oing to Love This Book Especially this book especially you are like me who loves to read Plus not only *it has romance but with the Navy Seals also Definitely a *has romance but with the Navy Seals also Definitely a star rating in my book I would definitely recommend this book to everyone who loves to read romance books If you would love to know about this author Caitlyn O Leary please check out her Facebook page where you can see what s oing on plus they have Blackspirits giveaways on the authors Facebook page Also you can sign up for her newsletter and you can find the author Caitlyn O Leary on com I hope you well check out this wonderful book I wanted to say thank you again for the wonderful book can t wait to read books from this author Falling in love with a male character is not unusual for me but Caitlyn for the first time made me fall in love with Mason before the first kiss was even delivered The author starts this book from page oneiving us a look into Mason s career as a Seal In charge of a team that has become of a family he is dedicated to rescuing those in need even if his life is in danger So it doesn t surprise me that he becomes the one to rescue Sophia in her time of needSophia is a strong woman who was forced at an early age to survive be independent and to never ask for help from anyone Her dad left her for reasons you will find out in the book her mother dies and her little brother was taken into foster care She needs a job a place to stay and a stable life if she is ever The Garden Of Emuna going toet her brother back in her care One night when she is out looking for the runaway brother she is confronted with two men trying to rape a woman and she rushes in to save her Hanging on by a Thread Sophia Anderson takes care of everyone but herself She will stop at nothing to keep her family safe When she The Cost of Doing Business goes searching for her runaway little brother in a bad part of town she becomes the one in need of rescue A White Knight Navy SEAL Mason Gault faced.


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    Caitlyn OLeary ´ 1 SUMMARY ( BOOKS Her Vigilant SEAL (Midnight Delta, #1) ) » Caitlyn OLeary – norfolkfmradio.co.uk I regularly stumble across a self published author with a lot of potential but who needs instruction in the basics of writin

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    ( BOOKS Her Vigilant SEAL (Midnight Delta, #1) ) » Caitlyn OLeary – norfolkfmradio.co.uk English Review Sophia is a strong young woman despite the trials Her father abandoned her and her brother Billy while their mother was fighti

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    ( BOOKS Her Vigilant SEAL (Midnight Delta, #1) ) » Caitlyn OLeary – norfolkfmradio.co.uk I just loved this story Sophia is such a strong character in when bad things happened she was determind to make it through and try to win her brother back from foster care Ah Mason I loved him he was just perfect He was demanding but not so pushy only because she was stubborn but in a way it good way This was great story because although she tried to push away Mason was not having it they were great together His teammates were awesome as w

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